Western Civ's Colour Practice

Rhoda said I should try to draw one of the characters like the way I did that girl. I chose the Western Fantasy Civilian because she's an interesting shape so it would be a good challenge; and a challenge it was! I don't like it as much as the girl picture, but I'm glad I had a go.

I decided her species is a 'Quilish' race. Just so you know what's intentional and what's not, I'll briefly run over the anatomy.

A Quilish being has a ridge that goes down the centre of their face from the back of their scalp to the tip of their nose. They have horns that are smaller and straighter on females, while the males have longer, more twisty ones (I forgot to draw them in, dur). Their lower jaw is very small, giving females a more heart-shaped face. Males on the other hand, though their jaws are also small, have a wider chin, giving a less "pointy" appearance. The fairly flat (except for the ridge) shape of the nose, with the wide bridge, give a Quilish person an epicanthic fold. Their eyes are very large and the tip of their nose and their mouth are small.

Their ears are fairly big and elongated. They turn down at the end on both genders, but on males they curve back up in a soft flick at the tip.

Quilins have hair that can be remarkably naturally straight (Like the Civ), but can be of any style. Head hair doesn't grow on the ridge, but they are covered in a thin, fine fur which may have splotches of other colour.

Quilish colours can be varied but are often earthy.

And now, the picture. The first is the Civ with no ambient light and the second has a pink light, like sunset. Sorry if the colours are out; I think my monitor isn't showing them normally.